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Post by Reductor » Mon Apr 29, 2013 2:07 am

Discerning friction at my finger tips,
I know the pleasure of our touch will go
astray, to wend its way until it slips
from out between our skins, as heat does blow
to atmosphere from tea, while melting snow
grows warm to meet the same degree as it.
From this to this we go and grieve the flow
of life -- and strain our minds so lacking wit.
But minds need not be born as pain, but sit
as freed convict well fed by godly guards.
Asura kings need only see it’s fit
to lay aside their greed. It’s not so hard,
escaping painful agitation here:
just cease to grasp all feelings passing near.

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Post by JackV » Mon Apr 29, 2013 5:36 pm

Bright moon
Escaping
from within silver clouds
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
Sat beneath the tree
He let go of all false views
Arising Buddha
Here where a thousand
captains swore grand conquest
Tall grasses their monument.

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Re: Post your original poetry here!

Post by Thanavuddho » Mon May 06, 2013 8:27 am

Greetings,

Here is a collection of poems I wrote during my stay at Wat Buddha Dhamma and Santi Forest Monastery in Australia. The collection is titled 'Message in the Bottle'. You can download it for free as a PDF file from here:

http://www.avoinsangha.fi/keskustelu/do ... .php?id=33

Metta,
Thanavuddho
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Re: Post your original poetry here!

Post by Thanavuddho » Sun Jun 02, 2013 8:56 am


THINKING

What is the point of thinking
what others think
about you?
I am my own teacher
questioning myself.
I have to take responsibility
of my own life.
“Tasmātihānanda, attadīpā viharatha attasaraṇā anaññasaraṇā, dhammadīpā dhammasaraṇā anaññasaraṇā.”(DN16)
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Re: Post your original poetry here!

Post by Thanavuddho » Tue Jun 04, 2013 1:18 pm

I AM GETTING OLDER

Green pieces of glass
from a broken Sprite bottle
scattered around a flat rock
like pearls from a broken necklace.

The same story everywhere
around the world
from the 1980's to the present.
Nothing has changed.
“Tasmātihānanda, attadīpā viharatha attasaraṇā anaññasaraṇā, dhammadīpā dhammasaraṇā anaññasaraṇā.”(DN16)
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Post by Hickersonia » Tue Jun 11, 2013 3:11 am

So Many Days

There is always another day,
Faith in this falsehood tests one’s fate.
What if I were to pass away tomorrow?
With something always left for the morrow;
would the next life be one of sorrow?

Perhaps my compassion surpasses my hate,
but when passion calls, I take the bait.
If death came upon me this day,
ever so dearly should I pay,
for so many years selfish play.

Ignorant, deluded, a sorry state,
the moment of death does not come late.
Should my last breath be this hour,
too long have I lived so sweet, so sour,
undoubtedly, I would do naught but cower,

A moment, a snap, over and done,
it all ends, this worldly fun.
There is an escape from this dangerous lure,
for each defilement, I must practice its cure,
so that I might end my days pure.
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Post by Viscid » Mon Jun 17, 2013 7:07 pm

I suck at poetry but:

Titans

From the great rift
Lurch titans
Awful, nascent novelties
That boom their presence
and turn their back upon time.

And the enmired are trampled underfoot.

And the maladapt are swallowed.

And the youth make idols of them,
worship them,
praise them
for their destruction of the past.
"What holds attention determines action." - William James

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Post by Thanavuddho » Tue Jun 18, 2013 1:33 pm

BACK IN THE DAY

For days on end
I used to spend my time
doing absolutely nothing.
It is that simple.
“Tasmātihānanda, attadīpā viharatha attasaraṇā anaññasaraṇā, dhammadīpā dhammasaraṇā anaññasaraṇā.”(DN16)
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Re: Post your original poetry here!

Post by duckfiasco » Sat Jun 22, 2013 3:42 am

Wonderful thread and wonderful poems to find just browsing :) Poetry has been a wonderful way to explore the Dhamma.
my hand is that of an old man
already the flesh shrinks away.

I have a pile of ashes for a hand
yet they are well hidden
red and smooth and moving.

a corpse writes these lines
but not one thing to worry about.

the ash hand and the supple one
are just this close.
that old forest path
closed off on both ends

there was a cat in there
mud flesh on stick bones
until he was just mud and sticks

i saw him every single time

and one day
he was wild green briars
and the forest path
was closed off on both ends

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Post by Dr. Dukkha » Tue Oct 15, 2013 8:08 pm

I have trouble writing poetry that isn't dark. Something I must work on.

The True Witness of Morning

It is known that clenching

clogs the arteries

of our irrationality’s ward.

/

Deposit the king’s servants

in their holsters.

Manipulative puppeteers.

/

When you rise

you must fall;

shame to the fragility of the neck.

/

But when you excavate

downwards,

you may suffocate.

/

Sometimes it’s safer to swim through the mountains.

You’re leaving nothing behind.

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Post by Pseudobabble » Tue Jan 30, 2018 9:27 am

Pseudobabble wrote:
Sun Jan 28, 2018 8:43 am
a hunter
Pseudobabble wrote:
Sun Jan 28, 2018 8:43 am
I am a hunter of distraction,
lying in wait,
mindful, alert, clearly comprehending.
Aware within, aware without,
resting on the breath.
Like night-time creatures,
thoughts, memories, fantasies,
try to creep in.
Fast! Like a hunter,
or a cobra,
I strike,
wiping away the dust of the world.
In calm repose, I rest
in the clear moonlight
of the breath.
"Does Master Gotama have any position at all?"

"A 'position,' Vaccha, is something that a Tathagata has done away with. What a Tathagata sees is this: 'Such is form, such its origination, such its disappearance; such is feeling, such its origination, such its disappearance; such is perception...such are fabrications...such is consciousness, such its origination, such its disappearance.'" - Aggi-Vacchagotta Sutta


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Post by Pseudobabble » Tue Jan 30, 2018 9:28 am

Pseudobabble wrote:
Sun Jan 28, 2018 4:31 pm
a warrior
Pseudobabble wrote:
Sun Jan 28, 2018 4:31 pm
Let mind be my sword,
cutting through confusion
like polished lightening.
My shield is alertness,
no unwholesome state
shall pass it.
I wear impenetrable armour
of harmlessness. Meeting ten thousand beings
I wound none, and
am wounded neither.
Boots left and right, of energy
and patience, trampling underfoot
greed and hatred.
Greaves of peace and persistence,
gloves of rapture and serenity.
My chestplate is equanimity,
the protection
of perfect composure.
Atop my helmet, the eye
of unrelenting vigilance.
"Does Master Gotama have any position at all?"

"A 'position,' Vaccha, is something that a Tathagata has done away with. What a Tathagata sees is this: 'Such is form, such its origination, such its disappearance; such is feeling, such its origination, such its disappearance; such is perception...such are fabrications...such is consciousness, such its origination, such its disappearance.'" - Aggi-Vacchagotta Sutta


'Dust thou art, and unto dust thou shalt return.' - Genesis 3:19

'Some fart freely, some try to hide and silence it. Which one is correct?' - Saegnapha

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Re: Post your original poetry here!

Post by rightviewftw » Tue Jan 30, 2018 11:11 am

A battle fought by those still restless
some do have faith others are faithless
Concerned am i remaining reckless,
closer to death further from Deathless
***
Both day and night,
across the sea
Where Dhamma is
There's light to see
***
It is as awesome as they say
We now should hurry on our way
Beyond warm baths and tasty drinks
Above cheap jokes and fleeting kicks
Away from wemen we should steer
And not turn back the end is near
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Intro to General Semantics
Factors & Perceptions

Parallel Dhammapada Reading
Chinese to Eng Dhp
"The statements; 'With the remainderless stopping & fading of the six contact-media is it the case that there is anything else?' '.. is it the case that there is not anything else .. is it the case that there both is & is not anything else .. is it the case that there neither is nor is not anything else?' objectify non-objectification. However far the six contact-media go, that is how far objectification goes."

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Re: Post your original poetry here!

Post by jabalí » Sun Feb 04, 2018 1:58 pm

Life is a terminal illness
This body, a tumour
Remembering death
keeping the body in mind
I dwell

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Post by rightviewftw » Sat Feb 17, 2018 7:34 pm

jabalí wrote:
Sun Feb 04, 2018 1:58 pm
Life is a terminal illness
This body, a tumour
Remembering death
keeping the body in mind
I dwell
Thank you :anjali:
How to meditate: Anapanasati, Satipatthana.
Intro to General Semantics
Factors & Perceptions

Parallel Dhammapada Reading
Chinese to Eng Dhp
"The statements; 'With the remainderless stopping & fading of the six contact-media is it the case that there is anything else?' '.. is it the case that there is not anything else .. is it the case that there both is & is not anything else .. is it the case that there neither is nor is not anything else?' objectify non-objectification. However far the six contact-media go, that is how far objectification goes."

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