Post your original poetry here!

A place to discuss casual topics amongst spiritual friends.
User1249x
Posts: 2749
Joined: Mon Jan 01, 2018 8:50 pm

Re: Post your original poetry here!

Post by User1249x »

Pseudobabble wrote: Sun Mar 04, 2018 12:16 pm Also excellent
Glad you enjoyed it, i like your poetry too and i remember you being quite the warrior:)
User1249x
Posts: 2749
Joined: Mon Jan 01, 2018 8:50 pm

Re: Post your original poetry here!

Post by User1249x »

Compromised by lowly aspirations,
The Hero builds intent on worldly gains,
He was steadfast but now he's losing footing,
As by temptations is his mind assailed
Sedated by the poison of the leeches
The Life-force quickly dissipates
As the Path becomes obscured by drunken stupor
then wisdom is reduced to that of cattle
Herded to Death that he does not perceive
Society - it's hard to see this Institution
Captivity - is the name of the game
The King of Death in charge of Executions
The Arahants are free, true victors unparalleled

I like writing poems it is like distilling an essay to make a concentrate
User avatar
Subharo
Posts: 164
Joined: Thu Sep 10, 2015 8:22 pm

Re: Post your original poetry here!

Post by Subharo »

There's a thread over at discourse.suttacentral, where you can post a haiku about your biggest pet peeve about Buddhism.
Subharo Bhikkhu
"There is but one taste on this path, the taste of freedom" -The Buddha :buddha1:
binocular
Posts: 8292
Joined: Sat Jan 17, 2009 11:13 pm

Re: Post your original poetry here!

Post by binocular »

Subharo wrote: Fri Apr 20, 2018 2:21 am There's a thread over at discourse.suttacentral, where you can post a haiku about your biggest pet peeve about Buddhism.
From there:
The temple is clean.
The practitioners, astute.
Look! A “cyber sage” .
Hic Rhodus, hic salta!
JohnK
Posts: 1332
Joined: Wed Jan 06, 2016 11:06 pm
Location: Tetons, Wyoming, USA

Re: Post your original poetry here!

Post by JohnK »

When I lust,
When I lust for chocolate cake,
Nobody seems to care,
No Nobody seems to care,
That I'm so much older than that cake.

That's why,
That's why,
I've been tryin' to confine
My lust to chocolate cake.

(Or maybe it's because lust for chocolate cake is less likely to lead to breaking a precept -- old poem, new reason, old person.)
:)
Those who grasp at perceptions & views wander the internet creating friction. [based on Sn4:9,v.847]
Garrib
Posts: 605
Joined: Mon May 30, 2016 8:35 pm

Re: Post your original poetry here!

Post by Garrib »

A Seasonal Abiding

Long winters aid believing spring could last
Bodies making nests where shadows melt
As temperatures are plummeting, aghast!
We wonder then if pleasure's what was felt.

No permanent oasis is discerned
A seasonal abiding is the rule
Awareness of the spokes as fortune turns
Now sharpens heart-space wisdom, misery's lull.

This time around won't be the very same
With nature set in vivid, stark relief
What hue can be invoked? For colors change
Who'd stop from falling crimson maple leaves?

If happy we be as delights do grow,
When sorrow comes we must learn to let go.
Post Reply